A lot of stuff could have been pushed more. The graphics need to be a bit cleaner, the outlines not so harshly contrived. Shorten the length. Get the point across better, there's some confusion as to what's trying to be said. . .
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Need to change:
Pacing - too slow
Get new, better images of door(s)
Go with only having one door; make door open on hinge
Cut to white towards end is awkward
Get point across more
Don't stack bunch of images on one layer
Confusion spatially
Change Text
Take text off of doors
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